This short story hates me...

I am down to the last five pages of this bastard-you know, where it is all action? Well... I can't make it happen.

Or rather, I am struggling. It HATES me. I can see it in my head but can't seem to make it happen, you know? For the most part, it really isn't bad, but I just can't seem to get the action done without going:

First she____then she______and they______ loudly. She_______ then she_______ and then she did it again.

...

Total, absolute, utter suck.